After Princess Danani was attacked by villagers, her ability to control fire grew unstable. She then started to like the new powerful feel for her powers, and she changed...into the Fire Princess.
I have to say the synopsis put me off reading this story for a while. But I finally read it and actually enjoyed it. A few typos here and there but nothing major. I look forward to reading more.
Thank you. I'm glad you decided to give it a shot. May I ask what was off-putting about the Synopsis.. read moreThank you. I'm glad you decided to give it a shot. May I ask what was off-putting about the Synopsis? I don't want the reason that people are not reading this is because of the Synopsis. -Thanks for reading.
11 Years Ago
Honestly, I thought I was going to be reading a darker story than what it appears to be turning out .. read moreHonestly, I thought I was going to be reading a darker story than what it appears to be turning out to be. When I read the synopsis, I thought I would be reading from the villain's or antagonist's perspective (hopefully, a redeemable one). That kind of thing could be interesting but it would have to be skillfully done and I would have to be in the mood to enjoy it. I like what your doing with the Princess. She's discovering something new about herself and that is a grueling experience. I'm looking forward to reading how she's going to work through this.
11 Years Ago
Yes it is generally about the Princess discovering something new about herself and learning to contr.. read moreYes it is generally about the Princess discovering something new about herself and learning to control new emotions and temptations. The story will get a little darker further on, as the Princess turns into an entirely different person, but that will be a few more chapters away.
Thank you for the insight and I hope you continue reading.
Hey there everyone, currently an aspiring author, I hope one day to see my name on the shelves and to be able to make a living as an author. But until then, I quite enjoy just writing what pops into m.. more..