"Loved turned Tolerance"

Unanswered silent screams

an island stranded

 

hailing to a mirage

a fading apparition,

 

Unresponded desperation

the terror of an unknown

an abandoned mind,

 

Dedication to known

aspiration to detail

the more advances made

the less and less

progress

prevailed,

 

As the pot simmers

low and slow

 

unattended until it is

dry split cracked and

broken,

 

For no use

anymore

only sat to the side

or discarded,

 

Only kept around

for sentimental

reason

 

presently

for

no

good

use.

 

"Love turned tolerance"

Reviews

[Sorry Infamous]

You can really feel the alienation in this write. Great job.

[Britiney Harper]

Its very well written and i agree very powerful.. i liked it :)

[deeps]

This is amazing, so very powerful in deed!
very well stated.

[Bullet Soul]

Wow, this is really good! I love how you used your words in this poem, they're extremely powerful. You obviously know how to write a good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much.