Molly and the Missing Piece
A Book by Will Wildsmith
 This is a fantasy children's story that I am working on.
It is a story of a young girl who somewhat reluctantly embarks on a remarkable journey to 'centre earth'.  © 2016 Will Wildsmith
Author's Note
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Any comments would be greatly appreciated :)
In particular:
- the description
- the use of dialogue
- the realism of the characters
- the logical consistency of the plot
Many thanks!
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Added on May 3, 2016
Last Updated on May 3, 2016
Tags: Fantasy, children's, fiction, story, adventure, family, fun, journey, voyage, Molly, and, the, Missing, Piece.
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