Too Late

Inspired by a stupid driver.

The blood and decapitation illustrate my regret

For the scurry and mindless course of events

 

After rounding the corner to a tumble and a smash

My head sliced off as I propelled through the glass

 

Not a day meant to be if I had been open to foresee

A three inch line of vision would result in casualty

 

Now I hover above landscape reeling over the scene

Of my lifeless decapitated body and head resting by a tree

Reviews

[Morbid Angil]

short and quick stanzas bring ths poem to a direct point, well written.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is so deep and thoughtful!
Loved the closing lines the most, they concluded the entire poem so beautifully

[Aludra]

This is very gruesome and gory but I love the rhyme, and it's very thought provoking.
As Soul Ember said: "flowins magically"

[Soul Ember]

Nive

flowins magically

[BLACKCRUSH]

I like it ! Gruesome but very well put together. I love your imagery also. Awesome poem.