i'll still be l;oving you somebody

I'll be still loving you ,

when the mountains crumble

down to dust,

I'll still be loving you,

when the seas all dry up,

I'll still be loving you,

through times that are rough,

when in mans way you lose your trust,

my love is lasting,

always growing,

better with time passing,


wizthom


loving you makes me stronger,

for your touch my heart soul mind ,

forever hungers,

i thought you knew .

all that's matter in life,

is me loving you

I'll still be loving you,when rainbows are no -more,

I'll still be loving you when 3 and 3 makes 4

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wizthom

peace wizthom@08








somebody stop the rain,

somebody bring on the rainbow,

somebody give me life's ,

pot of gold.

a warm body to love and hold,

would that be asking too much,

for a loving touch,,

somebody bring on the sunshine,

somebody show me blue skies,

white clouds to drift upon,

some one who don't love and run,

someone to be with me ,

as i greet a new dawn,

somebody to dance with,

in the shadow of a full moon,

out amongst the stars,

somebody who would love ,

with a poets heart,

when in love never stop to start

somebody whom i can name,

a flower a universe after,

somebody who don't mind,

spending a another life time,

here with me inside my living a dream,

somebody to depend on

when times get rough,

wont mind staying around,

to keep our love on solid ground,

somebody.i want somebody,

somebody ,i want somebody..peace wizthom@o8

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is beautiful wizthom! Beautiful!
Why does it seem so difficult to find such a love....


"somebody to dance with,
in the shadow of a full moon,
out amongst the stars,
somebody who would love ,
with a poets heart,"

... truly poetic. wow!
such a romantic and heartfelt desire for love..

all we need is love, love...
love is all we need...

Pure heart my friend. :)

[Orlando Murcia]

Nice!
Truly a wonderful
and incredible work
you have here

I really enjoyed reading
this beautiful piece

Awsome job!

Orlando M

[Barbara Walker]

Wizthom, I really love your writing! You express the human condition so well! The first part, you express what your love is and what you will do with that love, reassuring . The second part you express what her love does for you and again what your love can do for her and then the third part, stating what you need, who you need and how they can supply that need. I do not mean that this is a "Me, Me" poem. Just the opposite, about a man and a woman loving each other, being there for each other through smooth and rough times, each one being strong, when the other is feeling weak. That loving balance that human beings long for expressed by wisemanspeeks. Kudos, Bravo! eyepoetress
First part:
line 8 man's way
Second part:
line 2 my heart, soul, mind
line 4 capital I
line 5 All that matters
line 6 is me loving you.
last line 3 and 3 make 4.
Third part:
line 1 Capital S on Somebody
line 5 Capital A
line 11 Someone who "doesn't" (but if you want to keep the colloquialism, use "don't")
line 13 Capital I
line 18 poet's
line 20 Capital I
line 21 a flower, a universe after
line 22 same as line 11
line 23 drop the single "a"
line 24 a comma after the word "me"
line 27 won't
line29 Capital I
line 30 Capital I

[Brianna Brie]

awesome write!!! My words can not even begin to compliment this piece.

[shadadakiya]

hey there i agree dani very beautiful and from the heart you will find her when you stop looking just like that set of key's you lost and when you finally stoped looking there they were right under you nose thats the way love is so i have stoped looking great write

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Ah yes, the True Understanding of Unconditional and Universal Love and endless search for it. Wonderfully captured. Thank you for sharing so much of your heart.
Light,
Siddartha

[Cardinal Robin]

some one who don't love and run,

If they run is it because your love is so grand, or is i because there's no room for their love in the end, or of course it may never have been love to begin with...it is a curious statement, and my fave...

The epitome of ardent love! Although there are many phrases, some of them borderline common, there is not one moment that I doubt the sincerity of this Truth expressed in depth and passion. Well Done!