reclaiminmg my dignity

I'm reclaiming my pride dignity,

from the lost and found,

I'm setting my feet upon solid ground,

I'm here to tell you .



Ms night time,bad times ,hard times,

it's gonna be alright ,

i made it out the darkness into day light,


got ting over the worst ,

subsiding now is the hurt ,

it has become a dull ache ,

changes in my life i am able to make,

without clouding up my mind

I'm gonna win in love next time,


i know you thought this cleansing of the soul ,

would never come ,

or there would be life after the storm,

I'm here to tell you i am able to face the dawn,

our time together has come and gone,

Thu clear eyes I'm getting up from the wayside,

clarity is no longer a mystery ,

you and i just wasn't meant to be,

ladies i know you heard about my down fall from grace,

of that other who left in my life grapes bitter to taste,

i know you heard about me drowning in the lake of misery,

i know you prayed for my speedy recovery


hot love

an angel has heard my pleas ,

she's coming on a river of passion,

sailing in a boat of affection,

of so many wronged relations,

she's been thu the worst ,


she too has been in search


of an honest down home lover,

that'll be me,

that i am an all true man,

Good by her,,hello you

i see you my love,,ohh i see you,


no thanks not in the mood for politics,

obama McCain are all one in the same,

so it makes no difference who wins,

cause we the people will be the losers in the end,

all i want is some hot love,

hot wet sticky down and dirty real flirty,

rocking ,knocking till the police come calling,

hot ,hot, hot loving ,

sexy sweet conversation ,tantalizing me,

seeing you in that dress with the sun shinning ,

between your legs ,

that bush of yours gives me such a hard on,
it's summer I'm in need of a hot hot,lover,
with all the trimmings,

baby lady can't you tell by how i am stair-ring ,
you fit the billing I'm in need of some hot loving,





LOVE IS THE FORCE ,THAT RULES US ALL,,

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

I am impressed I heard anger, smooth it's way into desire. You seem to have gotten over some turnmoil and worded your way out. It's a good write. I loved the beat and flow. your words work very well together.

[wizthom]

u say i jumped around ,well brette if you read u would see as in life we move on,
so i feel you were too busy looking for the wrong to see the right,,next time look read with an open mind
if you wanna fellow the path down the yellow brick roadthank u for the review,,peace wizthom

[Brette Medb]

You jumped around a little bit and I think that towards the end it should switch to the beginning so it flows better without throwing the reader off balance by the sudden switch of topics, other than that the rhyme and the flow was great. I liked the passion behind the words.


Brette

[Nik Dendera]

Nicely done! Very erotic and well written. You stud, you! This isn't written in an idealised version of sex. Because sex isn't liek that, its dirty and nasty and animal in nature.

Would have commented earlier, but was super busy!

Great piece :)

[Dani California]

Awesome poem wizthom! I got a little uncomfortable at the end, it somewhat switched gears and took me by surprise...lol. But as always my friend, your writing is magnificent! The first four or five stanzas are particularly inspiring!

Peace, Dani

[Mistral Bilgera]

nice, 'Romeo'. haha, i said that coz you're the prince of passion and romanticism in this poem! :)

[Barbara Walker]

Love that third stanza! I'd put the last line of the first stanza, as the first line. As for the stanza regarding politics, I'd drop "obama McCain", use "they are all one and the same", so that this poem stands the test of time. It's great, Wizthom. I had to come back and add that it just sounds so positive, "I'm on top of things" now, "I've got control back now! Very confident!