disorder

the state of poeple today

wisemanspeeks wrote:


the system today has gone astray,

lieing to the masses ,

while brain washing the people,

chaos equals disorder,

discombobulation equals disorder,

we got mental and physical,

disorder on the rise,

but don't you worry info commercials,

has a pill for you,

a pill for all that ails you,

a pill to see you Thu,

advertisements has made the public

a junkie for pills all in the name of dis order,

isn't it amazing how Glaxosmithkline,

turned the little known social anxiety disorder,

into a huge marketing for it's anti depressant drug,

Pixel,

if you were to believe pixel,

the whole damn world is bi polar.

in Russia Sterling often called the people,

he ruled over useful idiots,

wonder what the pharmaceutical companies are calling us,

burnt out useful zombies,

eager for a cure that's all in the mind,

these are just a few of the afflictions ,

those greedy pharmaceutical company's ,

are saying we have,

you may have seen these adds in magazine,

billboards,on TV shows,and infomercials,

anxiety disorder,panic disorder,conduct disorder,

oppositional defiant disorder,premenstrual dyshoric disorder,

menopausal disorder,erectile dysfunction disorder,

obesity disorder,irritable bowel disorder,restless legs dis order,

if you were to believe pixel the whole damn world is bi-polar,

and every thing in it is in a state of disorder,

if i were you i would beware of those who sell you pills,

that offer no cure ,but mask the real problem ,

hell they don't wanna cure you,

they just want you as a burnt out useful zombie..now back to what i do best.peace wizthom

 

 

 

i got a dry mouth with the s***s, a  itch with a nervous twist,

a massive head ache,a nauseating bitter taste,

i am seeing double,with a  blur, walking with a curve

 

in my pants a  hard on that want go away,

 

called my doctor only to hear him say,

 

I'll be okay once i get another perception filled,,lol

side effects i have a

Author's Note

this was just a blog i did on one of my other sights,i was upset about not being about to watch a late night show when i wrote this,i mean i was upset ,thanks to u ,i now see the humor in this write..

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

lol, i see the humor, of a very serious subject. They seem to have a pill for everything nowadays. It's really such a shame. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[BenightedWhispers]

Very good. Humorous but filled with meanings. Nice job.

~ Mugetsu

[Cylis Derrens]

A provocative subject, one that my buddies and I have discussed at length. Too many people think drugs are the answer for everything, the overdependance is just getting plain scary.

[DarkAngelWriter]

Alright.

I love it.

Why would companies want to fix us when they can say "This is wrong, there is no cure, but this will make you feel better" and have us buy tons more worthless pills?

[Taja B.]

Very true! This is a raw , humorous, and nicely written poem describing the chaos of this world, with a decent flow.

However, I do have some suggestions. Maybe you shouldn't use so many commas. Because in some places, it wasn't needed. Plus, there are some typos.

For example:

[The system today has gone astray

[lying] to the masses .


While brain washing the people,

chaos equals disorder,

discombobulation equals disorder,

we got mental and physical

disorder on the rise.


But don't you worry info commercials

has a pill for you....]

To me, it flows better this way. But this is just a little suggestion.

Besides that, it's good.

Thanks for sharing.

[Nik Dendera]

Heh, true! Everyone I know claims to be bipolar. It boggles my mind. But hey, I actually have post-natal depression. Or, as I say, I'm just a more ruthless b***h than I was before.

Great piece, very apropriate in this day and age of quick fixes for small problems that are deemed huge by the corperations.

[Barbara Walker]

I love that last line! Absolutely priceless! Have an endless array of side effects? Oh they have a pill for those, too! Keep us in a zombie state and keep us worrying about the gas and housing rate, keep us so busy we don't know, they are raking in all of our dough! They lead us to believe they are talking it out in committee,but behind their backs we don't see, hands filled with bribes, taking it from ALL sides! Barbara

[Dani California]

this is different for you wizthom! i liked it.... such raw truth!
and the graphics...lol! very fitting.

i always love your work and this is no exception my friend :)

and i've always wondered about those side effects... almost always
worse than the disorder itself, don't you agree? :)

superb as always my friend!

peace, dani

[shadadakiya]

this is a very great write and so true you could write a book or 2 on this subject don't take anything anymore i haven't in a long time i do not trust the doctors anymore food and drug administrator's or the government when it come to our health or our life's there all in only for the money and yes we are there lab rat's

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

lol Neat! You're right. That was a really neat poem. Nice way to address the world--or society, rather. It's definitely got some truth to it behind the biased tone of it- but, hey! Biased is good. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood