disorder
A Poem by
wizthom
the state of poeple today
wisemanspeeks wrote:
the system today has gone astray,
lieing to the masses ,
while brain washing the people,
chaos equals disorder,
discombobulation equals disorder,
we got mental and physical,
disorder on the rise,
but don't you worry info commercials,
has a pill for you,
a pill for all that ails you,
a pill to see you Thu,
advertisements has made the public
a junkie for pills all in the name of dis order,
isn't it amazing how Glaxosmithkline,
turned the little known social anxiety disorder,
into a huge marketing for it's anti depressant drug,
Pixel,
if you were to believe pixel,
the whole damn world is bi polar.
in Russia Sterling often called the people,
he ruled over useful idiots,
wonder what the pharmaceutical companies are calling us,
burnt out useful zombies,
eager for a cure that's all in the mind,
these are just a few of the afflictions ,
those greedy pharmaceutical company's ,
are saying we have,
you may have seen these adds in magazine,
billboards,on TV shows,and infomercials,
anxiety disorder,panic disorder,conduct disorder,
oppositional defiant disorder,premenstrual dyshoric disorder,
menopausal disorder,erectile dysfunction disorder,
obesity disorder,irritable bowel disorder,restless legs dis order,
if you were to believe pixel the whole damn world is bi-polar,
and every thing in it is in a state of disorder,
if i were you i would beware of those who sell you pills,
that offer no cure ,but mask the real problem ,
hell they don't wanna cure you,
they just want you as a burnt out useful zombie..now back to what i do best.peace wizthom
i got a dry mouth with the s***s, a itch with a nervous twist,
a massive head ache,a nauseating bitter taste,
i am seeing double,with a blur, walking with a curve
in my pants a hard on that want go away,
called my doctor only to hear him say,
I'll be okay once i get another perception filled,,lol
side effects i have a
© 2008 wizthom
Author's Note
this was just a blog i did on one of my other sights,i was upset about not being about to watch a late night show when i wrote this,i mean i was upset ,thanks to u ,i now see the humor in this write..
Reviews
lol, i see the humor, of a very serious subject. They seem to have a pill for everything nowadays. It's really such a shame. Thank you for sharing. Debileah
Posted 15 Years Ago
Very good. Humorous but filled with meanings. Nice job.
~ Mugetsu
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very good. Humorous but filled with meanings. Nice job.
~ Mugetsu
A provocative subject, one that my buddies and I have discussed at length. Too many people think drugs are the answer for everything, the overdependance is just getting plain scary.
Posted 16 Years Ago
A provocative subject, one that my buddies and I have discussed at length. Too many people think drugs are the answer for everything, the overdependance is just getting plain scary.
Alright.
I love it.
Why would companies want to fix us when they can say "This is wrong, there is no cure, but this will make you feel better" and have us buy tons more worthless pills?
Posted 16 Years Ago
Alright.
I love it.
Why would companies want to fix us when they can say "This is wrong, there is no cure, but this will make you feel better" and have us buy tons more worthless pills?
<3
Life, love, stars, and blood.
Very true! This is a raw , humorous, and nicely written poem describing the chaos of this world, with a decent flow.
However, I do have some suggestions. Maybe you shouldn't use so many commas. Because in some places, it wasn't needed. Plus, there are some typos.
For example:
[The system today has gone astray
[lying] to the masses .
While brain washing the people,
chaos equals disorder,
discombobulation equals disorder,
we got mental and physical
disorder on the rise.
But don't you worry info commercials
has a pill for you....]
To me, it flows better this way. But this is just a little suggestion.
Besides that, it's good.
Thanks for sharing.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very true! This is a raw , humorous, and nicely written poem describing the chaos of this world, with a decent flow.
However, I do have some suggestions. Maybe you shouldn't use so many commas. Because in some places, it wasn't needed. Plus, there are some typos.
For example:
[The system today has gone astray
[lying] to the masses .
While brain washing the people,
chaos equals disorder,
discombobulation equals disorder,
we got mental and physical
disorder on the rise.
But don't you worry info commercials
has a pill for you....]
To me, it flows better this way. But this is just a little suggestion.
Besides that, it's good.
Thanks for sharing.
Heh, true! Everyone I know claims to be bipolar. It boggles my mind. But hey, I actually have post-natal depression. Or, as I say, I'm just a more ruthless b***h than I was before.
Great piece, very apropriate in this day and age of quick fixes for small problems that are deemed huge by the corperations.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Heh, true! Everyone I know claims to be bipolar. It boggles my mind. But hey, I actually have post-natal depression. Or, as I say, I'm just a more ruthless bitch than I was before.
Great piece, very apropriate in this day and age of quick fixes for small problems that are deemed huge by the corperations.
I love that last line! Absolutely priceless! Have an endless array of side effects? Oh they have a pill for those, too! Keep us in a zombie state and keep us worrying about the gas and housing rate, keep us so busy we don't know, they are raking in all of our dough! They lead us to believe they are talking it out in committee,but behind their backs we don't see, hands filled with bribes, taking it from ALL sides! Barbara
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love that last line! Absolutely priceless! Have an endless array of side effects? Oh they have a pill for those, too! Keep us in a zombie state and keep us worrying about the gas and housing rate, keep us so busy we don't know, they are raking in all of our dough! They lead us to believe they are talking it out in committee,but behind their backs we don't see, hands filled with bribes, taking it from ALL sides! Barbara
this is different for you wizthom! i liked it.... such raw truth!
and the graphics...lol! very fitting.
i always love your work and this is no exception my friend :)
and i've always wondered about those side effects... almost always
worse than the disorder itself, don't you agree? :)
superb as always my friend!
peace, dani
Posted 16 Years Ago
this is different for you wizthom! i liked it.... such raw truth!
and the graphics...lol! very fitting.
i always love your work and this is no exception my friend :)
and i've always wondered about those side effects... almost always
worse than the disorder itself, don't you agree? :)
superb as always my friend!
peace, dani
this is a very great write and so true you could write a book or 2 on this subject don't take anything anymore i haven't in a long time i do not trust the doctors anymore food and drug administrator's or the government when it come to our health or our life's there all in only for the money and yes we are there lab rat's
Posted 16 Years Ago
this is a very great write and so true you could write a book or 2 on this subject don't take anything anymore i haven't in a long time i do not trust the doctors anymore food and drug administrator's or the government when it come to our health or our life's there all in only for the money and yes we are there lab rat's
lol Neat! You're right. That was a really neat poem. Nice way to address the world--or society, rather. It's definitely got some truth to it behind the biased tone of it- but, hey! Biased is good. ^^
Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood
Posted 16 Years Ago
lol Neat! You're right. That was a really neat poem. Nice way to address the world--or society, rather. It's definitely got some truth to it behind the biased tone of it- but, hey! Biased is good. ^^
Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood
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