Chapter 6: Adam!?

              He was staring at the ceiling blankly. His life drained eyes seemed peaceful. How could they be? He had been murdered! My own brother, murdered.

               I sat next to his corpse, crying my eyes out on Edward's sleeve. He rubbed my back and let the crime scene investigators do their job.

               "My own kind... killed him..." I whispered.

               "No, not our kind." Carlisle assured me. "He was killed by a gun."               

                "Guns don't kill people. People kill people." I mumbled.

               "Correct." Alice said.

               "Wish I could've done something." Edward said.

               "No, this person was strong." Carlisle said. "He killed the vampire too."

               "I'd hate to have you tare down the structor, but we have a payed house now." I said.

               "Rosalie and I will move into the house, it's no problem." Emmett whispered.

               "At least it is going to good use." Jasper said.

               "Now he won't see me off." I remembered the wedding.

               "Don't think like that!" Edward said.

               "We need ya'll to get on home. Sorry, Miss Evelyn." Said a police officer.

                "Yeah." I said. We ran slowly home- slowly for us was nearly 12mph.

              

                "It's OK." Edward knew it wasn't but he kept repeating it.

                "Hey, look at this." I pointed to my computer screen. "It's an email from Adam, just a minute ago."

                "Read it out loud." Edward sat in the chair.

                "Evelyn, I faked my death to get out of here and start a new life, just keep in contact over email. Hun, I love you and sorry. Adam."

                 "Why would he leave?" Edward asked.

                That's exactly what I emailed him back.

                

                 I closed my eyes, making myself think I was asleep. Edward kept his arm around me.

                "It's been hard, I know." Edward whispered. "But, I know you can make it through this."

                 "I guess so."

                He kissed my cold lips. The coldness of each lip made it warmer. Before I knew it, my lips had parted and it was more... emotianal.

                 His right hand was gentally pressed against my lower back, his left on my hair.

                 Mine just dangled around his neck.

                 He pulled my closer.

                  Each breath I took between crushing lips, I could hear him breathing deeply.

                 Adam's move away seemed to melt away soon enough.

                 He pulled me with him to shut our door. We stood there for a minute, staring at each other.

                 "Listen to music?" He suggested.

                "No," I said. "We do that every night."

                  "Oh, yeah."

               "I was thinking..." I sat in a chair and faced him. "Maybe we could..." I really had no idea. "Yeah, I'm just making this up."

               "I've got nothing either." Edward said.

                And the kissing rage began.

                But this time, we were into it much more. I was letting him control my actions. I felt like a puppet.

                All that happened was kissing. We never kissed like that before. He was stress free. He wasn't scared and I wasn't either.

                 Before, when we kissed, it was a peck. Never more. Never a hand on my lower back, nothing.

                We had something, once, before, but I think we learned not to do that for awhile.

               

                We had had a long night, it was tragic, happy, controlling, fearless, scary.

                 But I was expecting more now. I knew that everytime we kissed, the emotion got stronger, the intenseness scared the crap out of me. And I liked it.

                  I kissed a vampire and I liked it.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Laura]

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[Alz Alz]

Great dialogue! I love writing dialogue, too. It's one of my strong suits!
well written.