THEN SHE KISSED ME :) !!!!!!

THEN SHE KISSED ME :) !!!!!!

A Story by Tevin Smith

   It was approaching 10:00 pm last Saturday night, i couldn't believe that the girl i had doubts of ever getting a  chance with, was sitting in my car. 
I couldn't take my eyes off of her, we were heading for the nightclub in town that's
where she wanted to go, so i agreed, since i would get a better chance to hold and caress her bold, but curving body while we danced on the floor. 
    
   Trying so hard to focus on the road, but her tempting body kept calling me, the sight of her made me go weak in the knees, knowing that we only had fifteen minutes more to reach our destination then i would have the chance to embrace her, but the time felt like forever. I glanced every (2)two minutes at her, deciding passionately that she looked liked a queen in her brightly colored dress.

    We finally reached at the club, i checked in for our reservation, escorting her to our table and helping her with her seat. we chatted for a while until the song, ''YOU'RE THE ONE THAT I WANT''!!!!!!! by grease came on. I asked her if she wanted to dance.    she said yes.

    Being swept away by her swift, but, gentle rhythm and movements to the song, her tender body sliding across the floor like 'MC Hammer', positively telling me that i can't touch that, so me being the person i am took it for a challenge so i competed. 
    
   The music had just finished and we were about to go to our seat, when the DJ decided to play that 
sweet, slow song, ''cupid'' by Sam Cooke. So again we went to the dance floor to dance this lovely song. Moving so gentle, so smooth, my hands gliding around her waistline, caressing them so gently with every sway of my hand movement, then she rose her head up staring me in the eyes. 

   Those dark brown eyes, her gaze lightened, sliding roughly over to my eyes, bold as a physical touch. My skin shivered as if she had stroked me there. She said to me,
 'Tevin, i really had a good time tonight', then she kissed me. Our lips touched, a mind-melting, completely mutual kiss, a connection so complete that my emotions were laid bare and helpless.

 

    

© 2012 Tevin Smith


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i love it, i wonder which girl has captured you

Posted 12 Years Ago


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12 Years Ago

a young lady by the name of akeisha
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