''I'M SORRY, I STOLE THE CAKE MOM''

    As I sit at the kitchen table

 wondering what to do,

    wondering if i'm able

 knowing that if I do it i'll be stable.

    My mother had just gone out to buy 

the frosting and some sweets,

    that would give me time to think 

and feast on this treat

    I had just sliced a piece

of the cake, putting it in my mouth

    noticing my mother as she stood there

knowing that she was angry without a doubt.

   Standing over me with a belt 

smiling like a sly devil, knowing that she had won

   here i lay on the floor in pain and regret apologizing, 

i'm sorry 'I stole the cake mom' 

                                                                                                  Tevin Smith    

Reviews

[Seraph]

O: why did you steal the cake tevin

[Tevin Smith]

i'm just plain wicked

[Seraph]

lol i know you are

[Sakshi]

Awwww....
If you would have given this poem spontaneously to your Mom, she wouldn't have minded baking you another one!
After sweet childish thoughts, the end seems devilish, a sudden twist...

[Tevin Smith]

well i'll try it next time and see what happens
thanks