The voltures of mine

The first thing I saw when I opened my eyes was a tree

A big, tall, grey tree, without leaves,

Just a bird, no not a bird. 

A ugly vulture , with little to almost none feathers looking down on me. 

With hiw small almost pin-like eyes glowing sickenning yellow in the dark

I should be afraid, they say the end has come when the vultures sing to you.

So, I  was for now safe…

I was going to stay here for the rest of the night and in the mornig someone will come and take me, someone

The thoughts of last night came to my head and tears start falling out of my face.I breathed out and almost fainted.

My side was burnig.

I took my hand to the sid of my left rib and touch softly the wound.

I lost my breath and warm blood started runnig out of me.

I took a quick look at my company.

The vulture twists as the blood was runnig on the ground.

I felt dizzy and weak.

I wanted to hear the vultures song, to close my eyes and just stop .

And there it was the most horrifing thing I ever heared in my life.

A heart stoping scary growl, like its soul was about to come out.

He was wainting petiently at me to give him permision.

I lifted the bloody hand in the air and waved with the only strenght I had left.

Drops of blood fall on my face and in my mouth.

I didn't care.

I felt them gathering. 

Their wings flopping in the air and a smell of dead animal was hugging me.

The bigger one a very black with glowing eyes aproach me and without any warning diged his nose in the wound.

I felt the pain, covering my body. 

I had an awful feeling that it will happen again.

And again.

I was counting the bites. 

One , two ,seven, twelve.

Until I stoped I took a deep breath and closed my eyes for what seemed to me
Forever...
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Reviews

[Katie Marie]

This is definitely a unique story, but the amount of grammatical errors was very distracting. You may want to go back through it and fix it up. Other than that, it was a very interesting write.

[Aliki Storye]

Thank you very much !!