Todays Guy

There is no perfect and there is no gentlemen.
No guy knows how to treat a real women.
I blame the hoes and the w****s in the bars.
I blame the ginos blasting beats in their cars.
I shouldn't be putting blame , but I'm not wrong to accuse.
At the end of the day I can see why guys can get confused.
The girls are all s****y , cows that give their milk for free.
Showing guys that"douchebag" is what they should be.
Girls are too easy these days , they don't make them work.
The way guys treat us could make me go berserk.
The girls that strive to be put together and classy.
They got nothing because guys go for s***s that are so trashy.
Guys you either can't take the hint or you are a complete dick.
We can't find guys who don't cheat , lie and trick.
I hate the expression "wheeling" , like are you guys for real?
What kind of a girl wants to be wheeled?
You guys aren't bosses , calm down with the talk.
How are you a boss , if you can only think with you're c**k?
No wonder so many of us don't want boyfriends and hate guys.
The good guy who is often gay is the only one that tries.
You "wheelers" out there need to buy yourself a clue.
No girls with dignity will EVER want you.
You w****s out there , need to get yourself in check.
You're making us ALL look bad with the random hickeys on you're neck.
Loving the girls who give it up on the first date.
Real relationships will be extinct at this rate.

Reviews

[LittleOddBall]

I fine this to be a very powerful poem. Anger and Frustration are the two most obvious emotions, but it also projects a certain... disdain of today's romance.

I enjoyed the poem. It flowed nicely, and readers can feel your emotions through your poem.

But I did glean two minor Grammatical error:
1. "No guy knows how to treat a real women" Women should be woman,
2. "How are you a boss , if you can only think with you're c**k?" 'You're' should be 'your'.

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Other than that, good poem.