Stay Strong

don't look back

It's easy for guy's to find someone new

But girl's forever say I'm not over you

Girl's always put in their all

While guy's just toss them around like a ball

Feeling like you always have to scream and shout

But they don't want to hear it so they put you out

Those lonely day's you spend apart

And having the worst pain in your heart

Trying to figure out what you did so wrong

When in reality it was him all along

You can try and change his mind

But his mind is what he need's to find

You should have never broke down and cried

If you know you're the only one that tried

It suck's getting treated so bad

And never being happy only sad

Start to think more about yourself

Burn all those memoires that are laying on your shelf

Then you will realize you can do better

And he will be the one crying in his sweater

Through the sorrow and the pain

Happiness you will finally gain

Never think to turn back

After your life is back on track

The game maybe easy for the guy's

But girl's will forever mean their goodbye's  

Reviews

[A.M. Victoria (LostWrit..]

"It's easy for guy's to find someone new
But girl's forever say I'm not over you"

"The game maybe easy for the guy's
But girl's will forever mean their goodbye's"

Good introduction and conclusion to the poem. Not only do they set and maintain the topic, together they get the point across! I find the stereotyping in the poem to be true in terms of what I've seen in my school, though there are sure to be exceptions.

For constructive criticism, maybe work out some minor spelling mistakes. There's a bit of correcting to do on the apostrophes also, but nothing that cannot be easily fixed.

Otherwise, great job on this poem (and good point)!

[girlwithwonders]

thank you!