Dazzled

Dazzled

A Poem by aether
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Another poem I wrote in the night time.

"
The taste of your
lip balm on my tongue

After the party had
just begun

The sweet sensation
of your hands in mine

With a feeling so dazzling
I was on cloud nine

We went across the lawn
to the back gate

Kissing beneath the stars,
happy with this fate

We talked for hours
in a small garden

Until we had 
to be pardoned

Even at home
the thought of her still followed

And I wish that I
could see her again tomorrow

© 2020 aether


Author's Note

aether
Wow, I keep writing random poems in the night. Also, I'm trying to rhyme things a little bit, but I'm not sure this is the best.

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This is a very nice poem, and I can really see the pictures in my head while reading this.
Also, your rhyming is getting better! (Not that I´m one to judge, but still.)
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on December 3, 2020
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