terror

 

a blinding flash a deafening blast burning on my skin,

a creator full of smoke where a building once had been,

flying glass and rubble rain,d down upon my head,

a stranger took me by the hand to safety i was led,

dazed shocked and bleeding covered all in red,

carefully stepping over the dying and the dead

Reviews

[Monday Parker]

I like it, very dark....But very well written... I love the last line the best. It makes you think, i mean i know that a building blew up, but it does not say where or why...But i like that better than being told just what to think. A few spelling errors but other than that great job!