Dance Under the Stars

Leaping and gliding,

prancing and twirling

dancing under the stars.

The moon is glowing

stars are glittering,

but still we twirl on.

The dance, with steps so light

you'll feel like you're asleep

like everything is just a dream.

I watch, eyes widening

at the shining butterfly wings

vibrant violet, blue, pink.

Soon you enchant me

soon I'm swept away

and now I join the dance

the dance under the stars.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

These are beautiful words. We do feel the movements of a dance in the way you built the structure of your poem, well done !

[wishystar]

Thank you. I was picturing a fairy-like girl with butterfly wings twirling around as I wrote.