Part of Me

So dear to me,

so true to me.

You are a

part of me.

I want to hang on

to the song you've sung

because you're always

a part of me.

I'm not with you, I'm all alone

the fire burns yet I'm not warm.

Even if riches appear

they're worthless, useless.

Because all I need is you,

since you're a part of me.

When you're gone,

I feel all alone.

Without you

the world seems dark

and solitary.
Without you

I wish I could

see you

because you're a part

of me...

Even if the candle burns

I see no light, still in the dark.

Even if I seem very happy

I'm pretending, so not really

Even if someone hugs me

it's not the same, not the same.

You are a part of me.

Reviews

[Sourodip]

A beautiful poem on love....''the fire burns yet I'm not warm.'' what a beautiful line.....Really maybe the one whom we love becomes a part of us.....Loved the poem.....

[wishystar]

Thank you so much for your sweet words.

[rnuff]

This is a wonderful read, so sweet

[wishystar]

Thank you very much! c:

[Euro]

This is a really sweet poem, wishystar :)
I like the way it's divided and the message is very, very clear and sincere
I just love to read love poems and this is one of the very good ones :)

[wishystar]

Thank you so much. It is dedicated to my dear, dear mother because she's done so much for me, and she's a very important part of my life.