Seasons

Seasons

A Poem by wishystar

Spring dreams
flowers are blooming
trees are flourishing
children are playing

Summer paradise
sun is shining
dew is dancing
grass is swaying.

Autumn scene
leaves are falling
rakes are sweeping
winds are colder

Winter miracle
snow is fluttering
child is watching
fawn is hibernating

Seasons

© 2012 wishystar


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I really love this!
This is a nice creative way to put all four seasons together, wishy :)
Keep up the good work! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


wishystar

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much Penelope!
You gave such great descriptions of each and every season! I loved this piece. It was fun to read and had a nice flow to it. Well done!

~Erinne

Posted 12 Years Ago


wishystar

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I love this so much! I love the images of the changes as time passes! I don't know if you meant it to mean this but it seems like a metaphor for life! This is a wonderful piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wishystar

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) I enjoyed writing this.
This paints a wonderful scene of the seasons!!
Great write : D

Posted 12 Years Ago


wishystar

12 Years Ago

Thank you again for the kind words :)
I like the description of the season. Short statements were strong and allowed the reader to have a understanding of purpose and reason for the beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wishystar

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I love your writing, it is very nice.

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