Dreams

Dreams are like whispers in the breeze,

blowing softly, dancing lightly.

They tickle you as you sleep,

bringing you a smile for a new day.

Dreams are golden, wispy and silver,

singing faintly, glowing dimly.

They make you giggle, or laugh, or cry,

bringing you emotion, whether good or bad.

Dreams are alive, flying and breathing,

humming deeply, smiling warmly.

They never leave without a message,

bringing you a question every time.

Dreams are sleepy, ghostly and pale,

reaching shakily, grasping firmly.

They aren't scary, but they aren't friendly,

bringing a feeling different each night.

Author's Note

I hope you like my poem on dreams, I'm just saying that dreams are alive and beautiful, yet they can be cold and scary, too. I hope you enjoyed this piece, I certainly enjoyed writing it.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams are the doorways to real life. Can warn you to be careful or go forward with hope. I like the thoughts in the poem. Bad dreams mean stress and too many problems. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[wishystar]

Thank you. I totally agree with everything you said. :)

[Lorenzo Giardano]

I really like this!

[wishystar]

Thank you very much! :)

[Sarah]

realy good. love the imagery.

[wishystar]

Thank you very much! :)

[Dipannita M]

Its really good! I love the comparisons of dream! :D

[wishystar]

Thank you very much Dipannita! :)

[Dipannita M]

:D

[Dipannita M]

Could you please give a review on this--- http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/OccamGirl/1068452/ would be awesome :D

[PurpleQuartz]

I agree! Dreams are beautiful and yet sometimes can be pretty scary.
It was a beautiful poem!!! I read it more then once : D

[wishystar]

You are way too nice PurpleQuartz :) I am glad you like it. I had fun writing and describing what I thought dreams are like- wispy, glowing beings that stalk humans in the middle of the night! :P

[PurpleQuartz]

:D