Rafaela

I wrote a poem for a girl I have a crush on.

                                  A beauty in my eyes

                                  A face I like to memorize

                                  Your black kinky hair

                                  Flows great through the air

                          

                                  I like your glowing skin

                                  Also what's deep with in

                                  The moments with you are true

                                  That's because there with you

                                 

                                   This poem isn't to receive your attraction

                                   It was just to vent my satisfaction

                                   Around you my heart trembles with love

                                    You're like a peaceful white dove  

Author's Note

Reviews

[James]

Dude, I don't even have the words to describe how speechless I am. I imagine her reading this and crying tears of joy, which I think is a good thing (I could be wrong, I ain't that smart). I wish you luck bro!

[wisemorie]

Thank you very much!

[James]

no prob! :)
you're a great writer!

[wisemorie]

Really you think so? Lol but thanks

[wisemorie]

I forgot to mention you are too. I liked your story and how it's simple but interesting.

[James]

Thanks! I had the idea for a while, finally wrote it out, I'm glad you like it!

[James]

Ooh! Dude! You should totally enter some of your work in a contest! I bet fifty drachmas that you'd do awesome!

[wisemorie]

Definitely will consider it.