Tired Eyes

Description of my eyes.

               

                  My dark brown eyes are tired

                  Feels like they've been wired                           

                 Open up wide doing their best

                  Staying awake, they need rest

             They've been through a lot of misery 

                 It's like they've been tossed like a Frisbee 

                 Never could they ever close 

                 Been fighting fierce foes 

                      

                 Vision is blurry and buffering 

                  One day please without suffering 

                   Restless never at ease

                   Rest my eyes please o please

              

                  In a world like this my eyes are sad

                  Finding an image of peace is hard

                  No peace, bad results they are mad

                  It's hard to find the right card  

Reviews

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I really like this poem. I'm not sure if it was intentional but the small font of the piece added to the feel of straining eyes. I like the alliteration of "fighting fierce foes" and "blurry and buffering". Great work!

[wisemorie]

Thank you! Yes it was intentional I wanted people to have an image of blood shot strained eyes.

[GalaxyGhost]

I quite relate to this. I have also seen lots of terrible things that have happened and continue to happen. I wonder how humans like us have become so dehumanized that we become machines and monsters. There are so few angels left.

[wisemorie]

Yes it's a shame. I agree I do believe there are a few angels left. A few but still some