Only You

Give me your hand

and I'll forfeit a ring.

lost in your eyes and playful smile

your body had a song to sing.

Searching for the word to fit

the feeling at me, you shove

An area between need and want

the masses call it love.

Time stood idly by

fixated on how we danced

I risked it all on you

my life forever chanced

I needed only you

so I pulled out the ring

and all at once I saw

the face that would never sing. 

Reviews

[Chris]

some looks are more telling than the words to ease you down...

[Inspiring Writer]

Nicely penn'd. words're great and powerful i must say. Last stanza's awesome and well written. Your this piece's short but too reliable to read. I'd like to look your some more stuffs too as you drop down on this site :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Time stood idly by

fixated on how we danced

I risked it all on you

my life forever chanced"
A splendid poem...Thank you for sharing...:)