i am overwhelmed by the beauty of the world the development of humanity i may be losing my sanity i guess its worth it for these drugs for they mask my sadness and make me happy for a brief time that is a trip i'll be relieved a few days of hell
The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read morethank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate this
The concept of this poem saddened me, but mainly I guess because I am a very different sort of person than the voice speaking here. I choose to see beauty around me and be happy without any form of enhancement, just myself, my emotions and my eyes. I know not everyone is able to do that however and must find other ways to experience peace, happiness, and mask pain. I only wish there was more help available to these individuals.
Well written, smooth flow, capturing a lot with few words. Thank you for sharing
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
thank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate thi.. read morethank you. this is written very much from how i feel right now and i am very glad you appreciate this