Excuse yourself

Excuse yourself

A Poem by Heather

I'm sorry that you misunderstand.
That the majority of you think I choose to be mean.
This is me, so take or leave my hand.
But I won't change for you, you can but dream.

I'm not sorry that you don't like me,
For I don't want to be liked or needed.
I just want to be able to see,
That it's possible for me to not be mistreated.

Sometimes it's easier to blame,
Than to admit defeat.
For not all conclusions are the same,
I merely lack the consistency to change it, to retreat.
I like to think I'm okay, I'll get by,
For it's better to be honest, than a liar and a cheat.

© 2016 Heather


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I love the confidence that shines out of this piece. The refusal to change and be something that others want you to be really speaks to me. You should never have to apologize for being who you are and this piece captures that exquisitely. Great job, Heather!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I really appreciate it! :)



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I'm not sorry that you don't like me,
For I don't want to be liked or needed.
I just want to be able to see,
That it's possible for me to not be mistreated.

I feel this way a lot at times, This is really good,
love to see you write some more poems.
I am enjoying them

Posted 2 Years Ago


Well written and a very good concept..i loved this alot..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the confidence that shines out of this piece. The refusal to change and be something that others want you to be really speaks to me. You should never have to apologize for being who you are and this piece captures that exquisitely. Great job, Heather!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I really appreciate it! :)
this is a very good poem you're who you are and you don't give a f**k who cares

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

You hit the nail on the head with what I was going for aha, thanks
People misjudge and misunderstand. Some of them think they are all that and want put others down. I think we have to be ourselves and draw our own conclusions. Life is short to worry about them. Excellent...:)..............

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

I'm passed the point of caring who judges me or for what reason, I am the way I am- which is not eve.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

I agree. You are welcome...:)..................

A really heartfelt poem that I have read.
I wish a lot of women I know would read this. Because it has the message that I would want them to know.
That you don't need to change yourself for anyone else. The world is truly indifferent but we are an individual at the end of the day.

My favorite line, "But I won't change for you, you can but dream."
Very strong. Well Written


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

I'm glad that you got the message I was trying to get across. I agreee. Thank you :)
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In my younger years I used to bend, sometimes to much, to fit in, be liked accepted, looking back silly really. I'm now at an age where I don't really give two hoots to what people think of me as long as I have the love of my family and friends I'm content. Cheese and fried onions, can't be to much wrong with you if you like them. Liked your writing Heather

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

I had the realisation a few years ago that it doesn't matter unless I make it matter, life is a lot .. read more
WoW!!!
strong confident and honest words........
true and sincere.........but people will never change.....will they?......

beautifully rhymed.....
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

I think people can change if they want to. Thank you!¡
Pushkar Prabhat

8 Years Ago

that is true.......
you are welcome!!! :) :)
Not much sucks more than being misunderstood. I think most of us want to be liked and to be nice, but sometimes it's just best to be understood, whether they like us or not.



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

Yeah, I don't even care as to whether I'm liked, I would just appreciate it if people didn't jump to.. read more
I wish I could learn to be strong like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

8 Years Ago

Technically you can learn. It's almost never too late. Though, I don't see this as me being strong, .. read more

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Heather
Heather

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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