Now i see

(found poetry)

Why break pure, true people?

The horizon met it's first challenge, night.

Are the default settings really that wonderful?

Proud? Equal?

Devoted, stood the news of today.

The hazards within an opened debate that is found.

"A recognized achievement", they say.

The search for quality supports a concept.

Intimidation, found also as a cover for the dark fire.

The public know the cries of the ground,

Respect the duty to work.

Shy feather, why disturb the use of style? Diversity?

A main feature, an aim.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

Nice thoughts. In today`s age, everything seemed rebellious with the variant hearts so, somehow.. this poem reflecting the peace of thoughts to get back freedom of living with "pleasure" as we lived a while long. Good to read!

[Heather]

Thanks! I think that freedom is used so loosely and taken for granted these days due to the fact that it is recognised. Sometimes the little things in life can make you just as happy as the big things :) Thank you for reading and reviewing, it is appreciated :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Hmm.. Umm... yeah, "the freedom`s really recognized" and along the sides of it, it`s been "misused" either by the hands of love.. isn`t it? So, yeah.. it should be banned for a while till the heart takes back its peaceful sensations for "love"--a real love to be lived with.

It`s a pleasure to read your work. This poem`s pretty impressive to read. Keep on!

[Heather]

People will always love, i guess it is like a blanket, blocking the vision of what is so near and yet so far away, love is beyond freedom but people get greedy, i guess nobody's perfect. Thank you! I hope you have a nice night/day! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

I think, this could be a great title "love`s a blanket" to a write. Well.. yeah, blocking visions`s all what seemed like 'being with nightmares' or turning the dreams into the darkness. Love`s itself a freedom so, yeah, needless to say, to lovers.. it`s "beyond' the freedom but i`m afraid, when they come to value such freedom, it becomes too late to recognize their love that they found into the broken pieces of life having some mess with such things & what they got, by the end, is the ocean of old memories. Well.. your replies are too quiet insightful just like your poems. I`m impressed.

[Heather]

Dreams are made of the darkness for darkness is merely a lack of light, instead of seeing the darkness to represent fear we should see it as hope for something pure still remains. Humans are like that with everything, we never full appreciate and recognise something until it is no longer, or gone. They should learn to appreciate the memories for all of it made them who they are today, made them that little bit stronger and maybe they will learn to see through the shadows of love if that is what's meant to be. It should be an Ocean of old memories for they should be in control of the memories, just as the moon is with the Ocean. Thanks, I'm glad :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Love purifies everything itself. So, yeah.. what remnant behind is the content of "purity" cos, love divines the pristine glory of heart by the speck of peace. Yeah, humans never value the things until its gone into the winds.. because, it`s all in the blood. Humans are made to make mistakes but only few are able to learn from their own mistakes. Oh, another cool title "An Ocean of memories" ... I admire it either. Well.. i`d a great time with ya, sweetheart ... hope to read some of your work soon! Keep writing & yeah.. smiling either ;)

[Heather]

passion is the density of love, you have a lot of passion and express it well. I guess mistakes are a part of who we are, they deserved to be appreciated too. You are full of great titles today! It has been lovely conversing through text with ya matey :) thanks! I look forward to seeing your words of wisdom! I hope ya have an incredible day and month! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah... mistakes teach us new leaf of life, no matter what, may be, cos, it has to be mistaken again with the emptiness of love. Life, night, winds, love, forsaken roads and lonely streets. . . everything divines passion--A passion `bout love (if we look through the hazel eyes of peace). Oh yea.. you are right, today.. i`m all full of "titles" cos of by a cold mused "Heather" .. she`s quiet cool herself ;)

[Heather]

peace is merely the echoes of love, the lost, and the determined. Humanity breathes passion, it's in us all which is truly incredible. The beauty within us all is expressed and our fears no longer matter for in that moment the passion takes over, it is truly incredible :) There are some truly great people, and you my friend, are indeed one of them :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Humm.. Umm.. now i`m pulling up my chair. Having some conversation related to writing is now making me more curious to float with your thoughts. Yeah, "peace" is in the heart; wants mercy? but in love, there`s no mercy because, we are all helpless to be fallen in love to quench the thirst of it with "peace" so ... yeah ,"peace is merely the echoes of love". Excellent line! Humanity`s all lost somewhere into the world.. and to seize it back, the heart needs more "breaths" to get "flown" off the specks of "past".

[Heather]

The past is underrated and overrated, people judge themselves too much based on it or they completely forget about it, it isn't right, it just is. Mercy is lost within the realms of Earth, the forgotten pits, the lost souls, the damned. People are to afraid to fly, to go into the unknown, even for the sake of humanity. Love is natural, even if we don't know it's there, it is.

[Wórdsmíth]

Having old memories on mind is good but being (walking) with the "old" memories is as hazardous to life as a fog ring of smoke to heart. Mercy`s only an option not a choice but in love.. the lovers make it like a "choice" which`s further not as good as "it should be". Heart`s even itself a realm of life; smile; into the shadows of magnified glory but some spirits are wandering across this realm to figure it out .. why the love has broken them? And, the answer they come to know from the universe is .."because, the love`s meant to be broken, no matter what but it`s up to you, how to re-fix its delicate wings with the faith of love".

[Heather]

But then again what life is without it's hazards? How do we know what choices are "right" or "wrong"? Life really is a guessing game and at the end of the day it's what you believe that makes it all worth it, that makes life bearable, even amazing. what if there isn't anything to figure out? what if this is all there is? Does that mean we have to give up and find peace? Or, stand up for what we believe as maybe it can be figured out, it just never has been before. Sometimes we are meant to be broken, it's who we are, but, it doesn't mean we have to be "fixed" either. The universe has a funny way of making us feel at home. That quote is incredibly beautiful :)

[Wórdsmíth]

The life`s not a "game" but a "love" is. You can`t reach out to the end of the life but it`s a life that reaches out to your "leaf".

Game`s just made not to be won or lose but, to know the abilities of mind how we play the game with or in what format.

"Peace" can only be found not into life but inside "us". If we are cool, the world looked damn cool but as the regrets overtake the strips of hearts, everything gets faded away to the ashes of grey. Well, yeah.. sometimes, the heart ain`t need to be "fixed" but to "heal" the life, it has to be fizxed everytime it gets "broken". So, this`s life where you & your heart both come to learn what the "peace" is and what the "aches/heartaches" are. Yeah... the universe has really a very funny way to make us feel home because, what it brings.. it takes it all back. #TheCapriciousLove #CreativeWritingGroup ;)

[Heather]

When you think about it, what is life without love? not even love of people, but of subjects, of religion of life. Love really is the spine of writing and living for it helps us be people and to have a happy life, yearn for more. That is why we should love what we have and sometimes love what is no longer, who is no longer for otherwise then we would be truly broken, beyond repair, beyond hope. hahaha we should get that trending! #TheCapricousLove #CreativeWritingGroup :D

[Wórdsmíth]

Oh yea.. love`s seemed itself a life but sometimes, the life`s appeared itself a "love". So, such "similar" things always make the "hearts" confused to which way it gotta move to heal the happiness. Hmm.. Ummm.. "The Capricious Love" is one of the best as well as "first" creative writings groups on this cafe`s site created last month. And, i`m thrilled to see the success of this group. Every day, this group glowing just cos of you such writers. Yeah, we can even we should get this trending... hey, why don`t you post on "forums"?? It`d be great to explore the glory of that group to stretch the conversations ;)

[Heather]

Confusion breeds curiosity and deep thinking which is a bonus. Life is wonderful and so is love. You would have thought there would have been numerous creative writing groups, it's sad that it isn't that recognised generally but bravo! yours is! and, you are making a change! I would post it on forums at some point maybe, I've never done it before but hey ho, there's a first time for everything and yeah, it would be pretty cool! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah.. deep thoughts are acted upon "bonus" but they are conditioned to be "utilized" and "spoken" with the sounded theme of actions to the universe for healing, again, .. what? "The Heart!" Oh, yeah.. thanks ... well.. when i`d created that group, I didn`t even know that it`d run successfully but it moved! even it`s still running successfully... that`s a pleasure to me myself to creative such a group and have a chance to know the value what others say `bout "new threads". Soon, i`ll be posting some more new threads. Hey, you too even can post a new thread yourself ... and your thoughts in there as well. Yeah.. there`s always a first time to do new things so, try it and explore the glory of wisdom ;)

[Heather]

Love should not just be felt but yeah it should also be heard! You are a true leader, without you the group wouldn't exist so you are our spine! thank you! I may just do that, and the glory of wisdom sounds like a great thing to explore! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

Yeah.. love should be heard as long as it`s meant to be "heard"; "felt"; & "loved". Oh, thanks .. sweetheart for the words. I`m honored to hear such words from you. By the way, you can even post your own thoughts on "what love brings.. it takes it all back".. on forum (if you feel cool with that)... well, i`d a great time with you. Hope to have a great conversation with you again! You`re cool! :)

[Heather]

I totally agree, we should express ourselves when we wish and not be judged because of it! I will hop to that tomorrow! I really enjoyed this, it was fun! and hey! it takes a cool person to know a cool person! :)

[Wórdsmíth]

I love the line: "hey! it takes a cool person to know a cool person!" xoxo ;)