the ways of this world

without you i would be nothing

i breathe your essence as it gives me life

you turn my nothing into something

we go hand in hand like man and wife

you dance in the eternal whispers of our souls

forever singing songs of pure beauty

your piece fits each hole

you are there for each and every one of us, it is your duty

and for that i thank thee, tree.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"you dance in the eternal whispers of our souls

forever singing songs of pure beauty

your piece fits each hole

you are there for each and every one of us, it is your duty
and for that i thank thee"

A very beautiful poem indeed. So lovely and expressive...:)

[Heather]

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review!! :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)............

[Heather]

:D :) im typing as i hadn't reached 10 silly characters

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha..............:)

[Swetha]

your title is exceptionally apt...good writing.

[Heather]

Thank you! :)

[Pryde Foltz]

They are beautiful, indeed. I really liked this piece, Heather. It's a treasure.

[Heather]

thanks, im glad you enjoyed! :)

[Misery]

Drawing words from the deep well of your soul and expanding your subject matter.
A tree grows in your poetry and a poet blossoms in Birmingham. Well done, dear poet.

[Heather]

thank you for that beautiful review and those words, thank you! :)