the way of the wicked

Lost I wander aimlessly,alone. At what cost do the love decide to love once more?

People glare and give me a harsh tone. I'm no liar but I can't seem to choose any door.

The path of my life and what its destined to be, 

How to make a decision that will come into view forever. I laugh, but do I laugh for me?

I wish to be heard, not just seen.

Does the sun really rise in our hearts?

No. Never.

Reviews

[MikeV]

Beautiful write! :)
I know this is off subject but I'm constantly with my headphones on
and the song "we are never getting back together," by Taylor Swift was on while i was reading this. Anyway, when i got to your line "no,never," at the exact same time Taylor Swift said it too,
As if she was reading it for me lol. i just thought id share that with you :)

[Heather]

thanks and what a coincidence lol hope it made the read even better!!

[iamshadowine]

incredible write! great job! nicely composed :)
keep writing :D

[Heather]

Thank you! :)

[Legion]

This is a reflection of the life I have been living. Sad but well done. Kudos.

[Heather]

Cheers, I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it is sad aha

[Pryde Foltz]

I really like this piece, Heather. It has a lovely flow and a strong message. Great write.


If I might make a suggestion I would break that last line into three.

So it reads.

I wish to be heard not just seen
does the sun really rise in our hearts?
No.never.

I know you are rhyming it with forever and this will break the look on the page but to my mind that's okay. That you have done this purpose will be obvious. Just a suggestion do with it what you will.

Again great poem

[Heather]

thanks, thank you and yea i will get right on that thank you for being helpful!! :)