Sorry Dad I lied

Sorry Dad I lied

A Poem by windtalker1252
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For all the lies I told you

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I lied

I never tried

 

Never tried to make you happy

Frogot who is the daddy

 

Trying to live my dreams

I forgot how you put up with me during my teens

 

Occasion after one

The things that I could have done

I built a wall and spoke to none

 

Protected me from the rain

Kept me away from the insane

And after all this I just gave you pain

 

Sorry dad

I will now try

Not make you cry

And try not to

Lie

 

© 2011 windtalker1252


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jai
One only needs to be honest to to the inner self...perhaps there may not have been the right guidance which parents are duty bound to perform...caught in own profession and commitments... realization itself is a huge step.I am sure ur dad must have shed many a tears to read this .

Posted 13 Years Ago


we are not perfect and our parents know this they hope we will come around as this poem says. i enjoyed it .. it is truly inspiring.


Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. an extremely inspiring poem ... inspired me to write from a parent's perspective ... to a son ... thanks a million ... got no words to thank you ... except this ...

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/serah%20jha/672474/



Posted 13 Years Ago


good way to apologise..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

he will be glad to hear it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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em
- dad knows - we all have our growing up to do - and it's not all correct - and not all simple - dad's gonna know -

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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