With you

The dude died

Whisky replaced beer

The bike without highway in tears

The lone rider cried

The straight road replaced the twists and turns

No more wheel burns

The direction was given a destination

You began disintegration of creation

Nowhere to ride

Nowhere to hide

The lone rider cried

And finally died

 

Reviews

[em]

- some 'togethers' - they just suck the beauty of life out - they leave us dry of our passions - we give in - to the comfort of company - no matter how bland - and sometimes - even abusive - it is when we resurrect - that we discover who we really are - and what we really hold close - all the little stars that mean a lot to us - that were - till yesterday - out of reach - begin to wander close - within touching distance - it is when we take our complete, passionate selves - to the world - that the universe reciprocates - with spectacular beginnings - ride on - you lone rider - i know - the road will bless you - with another set of glowing wheels - ridden by someone who'll share the song the winds sing to you - i know - until then - ride on - :) - the road's all yours -

[.]

heartbroken
i died
and then
when i
resurrected
i could
never be
killed again

. your resurrection deserves applause ... because your loss didn't succeed in silencing you ... you expressed yourself ... and incredibly courageously so ... once upon a time ... a band called pink floyd said ... crazy diamonds ... shine on ... so ... shine on you crazy diamond ... may you write more amazing poetry ... even if it's not about resurrection, it's always about resurrection ... the resurrection of the freedom of expression at the very least ... right ? ... :) ... plus ... and the word plus is stolen from paul ... i always agree with em and paul ... :D ...

[paul]

'whisky replaced beer', excellent line