GNR lied

GNR lied

A Poem by windtalker1252

Nothing lasts forever like the cold november rain

Even the dreams that we dreamt together are now down the drain

 

The first ride that we went on I had weird emotions running down my veins

Even those emotions did no last like the november rain

 

What may last is the pain increasing with every drop of that cold november rain

 

But then

There is me and em

Her fantasy and Sir Hart's legacy

Somthings last forever 

Dead or Alive

Hence I say GNR lied

 

© 2011 windtalker1252


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- :) - smiles coming your way - there's nothing - that can ever dilute - the passion of a passionate heart - and our dreams are testament to the fact - that some things - really do last forever - and those that don't - were perhaps not meant to -

forever
can never be
the listless moment
that dripped from cold hands
forever
is nestled
safely between
the warm hands of friends
and the magical glow of real dreams
forever
makes its way
through the din of
the mundane and the mediocre
because forever is meant to be - forever


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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. indeed ... when the magical reveal themselves ... be it em or sir hart ... it's forever ... the assurance that they are ... and they will be ... consistent ... in their pursuit of human and poetic excellence ... and so we breathe a sigh of relief ... and say ... well, GNR didn't know ... sir ed hart or em ... so forever didn't show up in their song ... glad it does in yours ... plus ... (and the word plus is stolen from paul) ... i always agree with em ... :) ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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- :) - smiles coming your way - there's nothing - that can ever dilute - the passion of a passionate heart - and our dreams are testament to the fact - that some things - really do last forever - and those that don't - were perhaps not meant to -

forever
can never be
the listless moment
that dripped from cold hands
forever
is nestled
safely between
the warm hands of friends
and the magical glow of real dreams
forever
makes its way
through the din of
the mundane and the mediocre
because forever is meant to be - forever


Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Now i have started believing that everything happens for good!

Cheers bro nice one.........

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 24, 2011
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