Truths

By Windstorm Kells ©2009

 

 

Time an inconsistent haze

Dreams mix with memories harrow

In mirrors of serendipity
clumsy impaired judgment

Yet another day passes in a laze

Intense wonder of tomorrow

A humble man living simplicity

A chaotic life seeking endearment

 

The isolated room of cent

Voices tumble into eternity

Just for today an arrow

While yesterday stalks in shadows gaze

 

Awaken from a confining daze

Lift the mists of sorrow

Allow growth not stagnant insanity

Set free a minds confinement

Wander Loki’s soul numbing maze

Suckle sweet life’s marrow

Vanquish depressions vulnerability

Lay your head, to dreams sent

 

Reviews

[Ralphy]

I love this, it has a unique flow and passion to it. The first stanza grapples my attention with ease of flow, and fills my heart with words painted on a canvas...the second stanza mystifies me, as I think about the stated words...the ending flows very well...I love the suckle sweet life's marrow...although different ...but nice...nice write Windstorm bbr

[Vera Iconica]

You have a very good range of vocabulary in this piece and you express your point vividly. The only thing I didn't like about the piece was that it didn't flow very well and had a very disjointed rythym to it. Other than that, excellent!

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

I like the darker tone of this, it has a bitterweet saddness to it that rings through your mind as you read. Good job creating an aura of mystery and reflection. I like this.

[Anata]

A poem that draws the reader in, makes the reader think and reflect :D
What more would we want?
Very nice!

[Spoken]

Wander Loki's soul numbing maze

Suckle sweet life's marrow

love these two lines. Very nice. Intelligent and wise.

[RHEA CROSLEY]

"Voices tumble into eternity'" and where they fall God only knows. This poem is very clever it makes you think. I like that.

[Suzanne Sherif]

You've managed to find hope and beauty in great sadness. Well done!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Hopeful yet filled with torment. Nicely penned. The trickster is astir. Well done. Thanks for sharing this.
So nice to see you again!
Light,
Siddartha

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

great job! each stanza was a poem in and of itself. so thought out and poetic, a pleasure to read. hope to hear more frm you.

[Kevin Andros]

beautifully written!

Kudos!

~KA~