Breath

abcdabcd, dcba, abcdabcd

 

Breath
 

 

 

By Windstorm Kells ©2009
 
 

 

 

 

An intense whispering breath materialize
Released from liquefying lissome lips
Profound delightful orbs of adventure
Angelic aspiration glows hungrily for passion
Sands of time enthralling pass before I realize
Astonishing a heart as it unforeseen sips
A golden heart longing for romantic pleasure
Interlocking hearts beat with attraction
 
The next day's anticipation
A soul's thrill of time of leisure
New life into a broken heart slips
Renewed vim of your beauty I poeticize
 
Ardor of redemption, you energize
Depression from my face drips
Gray days bequeath tincture
Hope of new revelation
Bestow novel chances to fraternize
New choices for audacious trips
Your splendor an immaculate lure
A bold glimpse of embracing impression

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

I like this one quite a bit. This has to take quite a bit of thought to rhyme out. What is this type of poem called with the abcdabcd etc. You have inspired me to give it a go sometime. The content has energy. It makes me remember why in the world we let out hearts talk us into love in the first place. Beautifully written.

[bob, small b. aka invs]

i'm impressed. i've never tried a rhyme scheme like that. well done.