A Time of Thought

A Time of Thought

By Windstorm Kells ©2008

 

Wretched crow

Angrily bolsters arguing

A simmering pot

Of intolerance

 

Dogs walk their masters

The breeze plays lightly

As children play

An intoxicating autumn day

 

The sun defies winter

Raining warmth

Upon radiant colors

Showing that fall’s arrived

 

Transition from life to death

From awake to asleep

Yet so much beauty

Grows from that of slumber

 

Voices invade my thoughts

A pair meandering

Lost in there own thought

Fading I’m lost in mine

 

Time has moved on

Pack… click, click

Inhale let tension evade

Exhale things are simpler

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

An intoxicating autumn day



The sun defies winter

Raining warmth

Upon radiant colors

Showing that fall's arrived


Fall is definitely intoxicatinng season so refreshing to feel the crisp air

very invigorating ~ a beautifully penned piece my friend so nicely expressed

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sorry it took me so long to review this. Great inspirational masterpiece! We should really learn to take the time to slow down and think about things, most of all enjoy the scenary. Great write!

[Brette Medb]

This is different from the things I usually read from you but I liked it a lot. It was cold and dark but light and hopeful. The images were cut apart with the short stanzas but it suited the poem overall. Great write!


Blessed Be

Brette

[Anata]

Beautiful!

I don't have the words to describe this ... beautiful is the only thing i can come up with now...

This is quite amazing actually, the way you built up your stanza's, the words you used ....
The general feeling when reading this ...

Just beautiful!

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully written. Great job. I enjoyed reading it very much.

[Mr. Misanthrope]

Great poem! The way you depict the transition of the seasons is very unique. And you offer a great amount of metaphors and imagery to immortalise the true beauty of nature.

Cold seasons are always my favourite, especially because of the wondrous colours flaunted during that time of the year. Apart from Spring, of course, when flowers bloom, and the smell of blossoms is in the air.

Good read! Keep it up!

Luke:)

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

Very interesting journey you take your reader on- the tone leaves you feeling almost disconnected yet observant of everything that is occuring; I found this lovely and yet strange at the same time. still a very good write.

[Chris Willits]

There are a lot of good lines in this like:

"An Intoxicating autumn day"
"The sun defies winter"

A beautiful poem full of grace and wonder. Great job.

[Doug]

i think you might mean "their" in the second stanza. i love fall. it's my favorite season by far! nice description!

-doug-

[Forest Green]

Working through secretive challenges...even disappointments. I find your poem a searching spotlight, seeking a indelible truth.

Nice work...

Daniel