Vision

Vision

A Poem by Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells

Vision

By Windstorm Kells ©2008

 

Watching Septembers shadows

Gently kiss

Shapeless illusions of life

Wings of serenity

Tiptoe through nature's sunbeams

As dawn hails Autumn's desires

Whispered constellation

Intoxicating twinkling

Midnight consumes

Adrift on rivers of time

Thunder dances in a veil of mist

Behold inspiration!

 

© 2008 Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells


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I like the imagery; this one seems a little disjointed as well however I think it works well with the theme as we as writers all know that inspiration is a disjointed chaotic energy in and of itself. Overall I really like this good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic form of old world romance. Beautifully written. My favorite lines below:

Whispered constellation
Intoxicating twinkling
Midnight consumes

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was really good every line was like a vivid image. I like how it was presented as well it was like it needed to be read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 25, 2008
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Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells
Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells

Eugene , OR



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As the wheel of time goes ever on, we change we learn and we shine, i am thankful this year for many reasons, i am 35 this year, so i look forward to an exciting year, with new friends, old acquainta.. more..

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