Liquid Inspiration

Liquid Inspiration

By Windstorm Kells ©2008

 

Where are dreams?

Confused uncertain reality

Astray on pathways of the mind

Wander athwart due to time

Lines feebly scuff existence

Nights of claustrophobia

 

Seeking solace within

Intensity revitalized found

Liberate the soul vehemence

Austere heart of cerulean ice

Smolders with myriad fervor

Splattered for the entire world

 

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

Funny how when posed the question where are your dreams most people assume they are nothing more than our imagination at work in the hours after we close our eyes but they are so much more than that. Astray is what we are when our dreams are denied us for they lead us through a chaotic world and relieve worries that constantly plague our minds. Great write. I loved this one!

Blessed Be
Brette

[D Poet K]

Different...yet really well written. I'd say more yet my mind is just blank at the moment. Sorry

[Brianna Brie]

Wow...interesting mix of words in this poem. Definitely one to think upon as I remember last nights dreams. Great job!