Whispered Words

 

Whispered Words

By Windstorm Kells ©2008

 

Dancing candle flame

Thoughts lost in flickering stars

A Wren revealed choice

 

 

 

Reviews

[Frances O'Neill]

I am not sure of I understand the haiku, but it sounds as though it might be fascinating! Are the

concerned ones inside or outside? Is it daytime or night time?

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Haiku!

Author Nancy Lee Shrader
Haiku Smiles
The Curse of Mayweather House
IS IT NOW? The End of Days!
IS HE MESSIAN? Messianic Prophecies Revealed!

Coming Soon
The Haunting of Mayweather House
Celestial Invasion

[Fran Marie]

Quite Lovely in Haiku verse and so nicely penned~

THanks for sharing in the Haiku Contest~Fran Marie

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I love Haiku. This is certainly one of the best I have read.

[Gandré]

I like this, my sort of writing. I like to think that thoughts have connection with stars. Indeed we make stars with our thoughts. That's what I believe. Nicely done.

[Brette Medb]

To me it sounds a bit of divination : ) I liked this, the poem was extremely short but the wren at the end made me smile. A wren revealed choice, a bold choice to be made revealed by a bold candle flame.

Brette