Sugar-Coated Lies

Sugar-Coated Lies

By Windstorm Kells ©2005

 

 

Living lies, deceit

What happened?

Promises of forever

A tactical weapon

Falsifications, ignorance

Universal hatred, lonely

Unqualified to blame

Sorrow, misery fuel the flame

Burning brightly

Within a coated shell

Living without hope

Another rejection in the jar

 

Lies, lies, lies

Speak with forked tongue

Yet, could it be true

If so, a seed spent

Nothing to come of it

Truly alone

Dreams of light fading

What will be?

Shall come no sooner

Then it should, but why

Will I find love?

Or only suffering?

 

Please Gods hear my plea

Someone I can love

 Who is beautiful, intelligent?

On the out side and inside

For the good of all

Harming none

Hear my plea

I’m tired of hurting.

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Please Gods hear my plea
Someone I can love
Who is beautiful, intelligent?
On the out side and inside
For the good of all
Harming none
Hear my plea
I'm tired of hurting.

"Another rejection in the jar" I love this line. Often times it is like we are collecting them in a jar. Great last verse serving as a prayer for us all.

[Celtic Cat]

ouch ouch and more ouch. The pain is dripping in this piece. There's also so many unique lines that jump off the page. I hope the Gods hear your plea, after all, isn't that what we all want? Excellent, excellent write.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Interesting form, old message. Crying the blues. I cry them too, well done.