How beautiful you are!

Your musical ways about you

Are unending songs upon my brow?

You grace the day with your own sunshine

Moving even the darkest of clouds,

For my spinning eyes so confused.

 

The depth of those starlight’s

Draw upon the very gravity of my being

Feeling what eternity is like, loved and warmth

The serenity and hardships aglow

But determination sparkles with brilliance.

 

A silken clad figure smiles and melts my senses

Yet sparks fly when we touch again, yet, again

Skin like silken gold screaming for attention

Longing to caress, yet my hand stills

Can you feel your beauty?

 

I long to journey the lines of your smile

With but a flick of the tongue

Yet another is blessed

As I should I bow to the very floor with my brow

But wanting to rip the shards away

I bellow follow the conducted code

 

 

 

As I saw happiness fleeing

Wanting to rap you close

To keep you safe and happy

My best friend in the whole of eternity

There is nothing I wouldn’t do for you

 

From the beginning you stoked a fire

As time came I saw you love, now lost

Seeing you still, my heart crumbles

I want to right, am me yet in the wrong?

But to kill growing emotions, I aught not.

 

Tried in vein to remain true, straps broken

Confusion and torment gallant allies.

Rushing to meet someone like you,

Yet, anguish at every turn.

Why me, yet please more.

 

Wanting, waiting, wishing

Unsure what to do

But thinking always

Of just

How beautiful you really are!

 

Reviews

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

I love your writing style. This is beautiful like a song. You have a very traditionally flowing way of writing. Reminds me of maybe Keats...

Anyway, good job fantastic write.

[Vera Iconica]

Wow, at first it sounded kind of like a song a bard would sing in a King's court, but as it went along, it transformed into something a little more modern, but it kept that old world feel throughout. It was wonderful, amazing, and magnificent!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A loving tribute to someone who seems removed somehow - unfortunate but it seems you may have that one in the end. Thank you and a four leafed clover in one way or another-the best of ways to you.
Light,
Siddartha