Phenomenon

Thru our wits

Men are made

The ability to compromise

Makes us noble

Tho' our emotions

May create divinity

Tears in our words

Mark our souls forever

 

Lost in the night sky

Stars are eternal

Lingering smiles

See the radiance of spring

Look at yourself

Seek thy own truth

Logic in the spirit

Showing beauty of inspiration

Reviews

[[untitled]]

This was very good! The last stanza was the most powerful for me. Although, I found the whole poem to be powerful. The words in the last stanza created more emotion for me. You are very talented!

[Steffi]

"Lost in the night sky
Stars are eternal
Lingering smiles
See the radiance of spring"

[Stonewall]

This is quite good, though I do wonder at the use of 'thru' especially when contrasted with the older style of writing.