Windows

So many things unseeable
Yet to look is to bee seen
There is not a better way to see
Than thru windows of the soul

Some are covered
with dust and spider webs
Boarded up and shut tight
To open it up, you would see
A world of complete wonder

Some are scared to look inside
The case of the never written book
But those who take the view in full
Are gifted with a tale for all to see
their wishes come true
 

Reviews

[Carrie Montgomery]

I enjoyed this very much: short and to the point, but nothing lacking. I enjoy your writing and look forward to reading more. Have a great weekend.

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This is really good! I love the line "Some are scared to look inside...The case of the never written book" This was just very good.

[Ember]

I like it. Well writen. Good job.

[Leah Maldonado]

wow this is really beautiful!
I liked the line
with dust and spider webs


thats such a cool interpration of what eyes look like...
really great,
Leah