Pipi's Summer
A Book by Antara Kundu
 When little Pipi sets out on her FIRST long trip, she's greeted by a WHOLE NEW world! What does Pipi make of all that she sees? - A tiny book of fiction with a few hand-drawn comic illustrations.
 © 2013 Antara Kundu
Author's Note
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I am not sure how to categorize this writing since I've included in it a few hand-drawn comic illustrations, and yet it is far from what can be called a comic. Any suggestions/improvement tips would be most welcome.
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Amazing story,Antara.
Wish you great success.
Could you pretest the material with children in the nearby school and in your neighborhood to see how they
understand the content?
You might use a little easy English for the understanding of more number of Indian children.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
That's a really helpful review, Zainul. I totally appreciate your concern about the difficulty level.. read moreThat's a really helpful review, Zainul. I totally appreciate your concern about the difficulty level of the vocabulary used. I need to think more on this point - and yes - pretesting would be the best option. Many thanks!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Antara for accepting the need of pretesting.
I understand that you are an IT expert... read moreThank you Antara for accepting the need of pretesting.
I understand that you are an IT expert.You can make the content very attractive by using more graphics than words.If you plan the book or e-book you can go for some animation too.
Taking suggestions from an educational psychologist,an educationist and a linguist might make a wonderful product which may be a very popular work someday.
Targeting is also very important issue.I suppose,you have initially focused on Bengali children using terms like,'mamabari'.I feel very happy that you have honored my culture.But,if you want to make a profitable business,you can also consider the children of whole India,Bangladesh and primary level children of all English medium schools.
Have I thrown you into some complex dilemma?
Wish to hear from you soon.
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11 Years Ago
Now that's the kind of feedback all writers, be they professional or amateur, yearn for! Thanks agai.. read moreNow that's the kind of feedback all writers, be they professional or amateur, yearn for! Thanks again! Extremely useful suggestions. Though I wasn't thinking of taking up this series on a 'big scale', this comment makes me want to do so. Let's see how things turn out to be.
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11 Years Ago
I appreciate your ability to respond concisely and nicely.
Please go ahead.
I am eagerly.. read moreI appreciate your ability to respond concisely and nicely.
Please go ahead.
I am eagerly waiting to see how you perform.
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Amazing story,Antara.
Wish you great success.
Could you pretest the material with children in the nearby school and in your neighborhood to see how they
understand the content?
You might use a little easy English for the understanding of more number of Indian children.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
That's a really helpful review, Zainul. I totally appreciate your concern about the difficulty level.. read moreThat's a really helpful review, Zainul. I totally appreciate your concern about the difficulty level of the vocabulary used. I need to think more on this point - and yes - pretesting would be the best option. Many thanks!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you Antara for accepting the need of pretesting.
I understand that you are an IT expert... read moreThank you Antara for accepting the need of pretesting.
I understand that you are an IT expert.You can make the content very attractive by using more graphics than words.If you plan the book or e-book you can go for some animation too.
Taking suggestions from an educational psychologist,an educationist and a linguist might make a wonderful product which may be a very popular work someday.
Targeting is also very important issue.I suppose,you have initially focused on Bengali children using terms like,'mamabari'.I feel very happy that you have honored my culture.But,if you want to make a profitable business,you can also consider the children of whole India,Bangladesh and primary level children of all English medium schools.
Have I thrown you into some complex dilemma?
Wish to hear from you soon.
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11 Years Ago
Now that's the kind of feedback all writers, be they professional or amateur, yearn for! Thanks agai.. read moreNow that's the kind of feedback all writers, be they professional or amateur, yearn for! Thanks again! Extremely useful suggestions. Though I wasn't thinking of taking up this series on a 'big scale', this comment makes me want to do so. Let's see how things turn out to be.
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11 Years Ago
I appreciate your ability to respond concisely and nicely.
Please go ahead.
I am eagerly.. read moreI appreciate your ability to respond concisely and nicely.
Please go ahead.
I am eagerly waiting to see how you perform.
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Antara KunduBangalore, India
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A Development Consultant, Specialist - working in the IT-Telecom sector. Perennially caught between irritating To Do lists and random (somewhat messy) thoughts on life. Struggles to manage time for 's.. more..
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