we all are wind up dolls

just how we can move only with a key

 

 

we are all a wind up doll just waiting for some one to turn are key. i fno one is there then we are stuck on a shelf just for looks and that's all so how do we spin if there is no one to turn are key. so we just sit there waiting for someone to come, but we know no one will come for us so we just sit there all lonely still waiting for the right person.some of us aren't real lucky so are key is never turned and we sit there collecting dust. because no one will turn are key or they will stop us right in the middle of a spin and let us rust. so why are we just wind up dolls? tell me this always happen to us when we move the only way is by a key or a master when we can think for are self, but they don't care we can't talk we just stare so how can we say a word or move are body by are self. But now I am stuck no one can really hurt that's what I'm told but we can get hurt ,but no one will care that's how much of a wind up doll we are. so the next dance you do just remember your that much of a doll. not alound to move, say a word, or even be free. so now i stand here and plee even though i can't be heard i might as well smile when i spin so just remember what will happen once you leave me to rust when you can play with that new doll but you forget when you grow you won't want a wind up doll so you. so when you say good bye just remember i can live forever.

 

 

                       by, 

                a girl who thinks different     then you    

Author's Note

just remember i can be hurt

Reviews

[chey my nickname]

ok i might do that next time

[Sarah A. Nelson]

The writing isn't bad, but I have an issue with reading something by someone who claims to be a writer, that is full of typos and bad grammar. Personally, I'd double check everything before posting it to be reviewed.