lonely and sad

lonely and sad

A Poem by Naomi Flowers
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loosing control

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Im always so lonely and that makes me so sad

I want to make friends

But everyone keeps pushing my away

The only time im wanted

I just get used and thrown away like trash

But no more I finally snap

Killing everybody who ever threated me badly

I enjoyed hearing their screams while I chop them to pieces

I show no mercy to anyone

and I’m done I gaze at my master piece

© 2013 Naomi Flowers


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But everyone keeps pushing my away
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But everyone keeps pushing me away

again like the first...seems a continuation...showing your conflicts...within the lines...just a misspelled word in that line...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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But everyone keeps pushing my away
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But everyone keeps pushing me away

again like the first...seems a continuation...showing your conflicts...within the lines...just a misspelled word in that line...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Naomi Flowers
Naomi Flowers

Roatan, Honduras



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