Love sweet Love

This story is about a love triangle

All the members of the pack including Drexel sat around the fire joking around but Raila didn’t seem if she was having fun and Shadow noticed that he wanted to know if she was ok but she left before he had the chance so he followed her. Raila finally stop on top of a hill she sat down and looked at the moon Shadow slowly walked towards her "is something bothering you Raila" he said Raila turn around and looked at him “oh it’s you Shadow yes something is bothering me" she said "what is it" said Shadow " it’s that I don’t understand why my dad didn’t tell me I was engaged to Drexel I don’t think I like him as much as I like you....wait wait forget that last part” she look away and started to blush Shadow smiled "look at me Raila “put his paw on hers Raila turns and saw that he was blushing too "I like you too but you have to decide with which of us you want in your life do you want to follow your dads wish  or your heart's"  said Shadow " that a very difficult decision but the only thing I’m thinking about is that I’m all alone with you" said Raila she gets closer to Shadow and nuzzles him" I’m so happy when I’m with you said Shadow nuzzles her back " I wish we can stay like this forever" said Raila they cuddle together under the moon until they heard howling and it was the pack that was calling them Shadow howls back "let’s go back" said Shadow "wait “said Raila she walks towards him and kisses him let’s keep this a secret ok and runs back to the pack and Shadow follows her "where were you Raila I was really worried" said Drexel well I thought I heard something coming towards us so I decided to go see what it was and Shadow  went with me but we couldn’t find it “said Raila she sits next to Drexel "Glair you wore gone too but you came back before they did where wore you"  said  Skailen "let’s just say it’s a secret right Shadow and Raila" grins at them.

The end

Author's Note

This characters are from the webcomic im writing please forgive me if I have grammar mistakes and feel free to have suggestions or advise Thank you

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I would split this into at least 2 or 3 paragraphs...just seems jumbled together....give this an editing and grammar/spell check...and repost your work...may be change the font to a more readable one...seems like an excerpt to the start of a book...a love triangle...this can lead into all sorts of things...