Dream Land

the higher your IQ the more you dream

Why don't you come

Come away with me

just close your eyes

And fall asleep

Drift away

Across the sky

In your dreams

You can fly

Fly far away

Never to return

To the land of the day

 

There you lay

Here you play

The songs we sing

All sound the same

To us recite

To you entice

Wind will blow

Away the rows

 

The doors now open

You can see

What awaits you

Come and can take a peek

We invite you come

Step further into

The land of sleep

 

But beware

For the price is steep

If you lose track

Of what's reality

And what's the dream

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

please once again excuse my grammer it's horrible.
theyr suppossed to be a picture but my computer is being stuuupid

Reviews

[Lou Odlaw]

Hey, Look! The only error I can find is your Note. Everyone please note: THERE IS NO E IN GRAMMAR!! I saw not one problem. Very nice.

[Aurora Lynn]

Actually, for once in your life, I couldn't pick out any grammar mistakes on the way through the first time. Bravo. :)

I liked how everything SEEMED to ryhme (sp?) even though some of it didn't. It's the type of poem you'd read at one of those poetry clubs and the audience snaps and stuff. Rolls off of your tongue and sounds pretty. BRILLIANT.

[Aurora Lynn]

Actually, for once in your life, I couldn't pick out any grammar mistakes on the way through the first time. Bravo. :)

I liked how everything SEEMED to ryhme (sp?) even though some of it didn't. It's the type of poem you'd read at one of those poetry clubs and the audience snaps and stuff. Rolls off of your tongue and sounds pretty. BRILLIANT.

[compositionc]

Nice...
very...ghetto, loljk. It's...nice.
KIND OF COOL AND MYSTICAL.
XD
ignore me, i'm sugar high