the lucky one

don't judge this one i was really bored during study hall

whispers, whispers

down the hall

a message written

on the wall

who will be

the lucky one

that the devil takes

with the sun

the torturous

event will prevail

comming down

hard as hail

into the place

lost in space

where words

can kill

and looks the same

screams of pleasure

screams of pain

who can tell

from who they came

the beast will come

with the sun

to steal away

the lucky one

Author's Note

just keep ignoring my grammer and spelling.

Reviews

[OtakuXC]

PFF, love this C:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Pure poetry that speaks to the innocence and glare in us all, well done

[halflives]

*is spazzing because it was so good*

[compositionc]

That was AMAZING. I loved it.
-is going to share-