Captured Innocence

Captured Innocence

A Poem by Pax











 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Horror speaks in silence

    And Fear speaks in signs

              It’s written on my face

                        and on the faces I see

 

How did I end up here?


A masked man brought us food

The smell of it drives us mad in hunger

We eat like we're crazy

Devouring it like messy animals

 

I see the eyes of superiority

            In the sight of the masked man

I look at them with deep curiosity

He looks back with a look of intent

Deep blue eyes inspect the whole me

Then I realized, everyone, including me

            Wears nothing but just two pieces of undergarments               

I quickly cover my well-being

Then he just walks away

 

I felt dirty ,

            Weary,

And cold in this rusty dark place

Where are we going?

Our future is uncertain

I felt that our life is for sale

Like animals going to be slaughtered

 

Sleep is taking my reality

Hoping that dreams will wash away

            the fear, horror and uncertainty along the way.                      

© 2013 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
credits to the images goes to:
MissWiggle

Justice is blind when money talks
people who treats women as a pleasure tool is just cruel
this poem tackles about white slavery

I still haven't write anything good lately
so here is an old one
written on may 21, 2012
I'm still looking for inspirations...

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How you awaken within us the painful truth that there are thousands.. perhaps millions, who are in such horrid conditions even as we dream at night. Your poetry brings about the pain and anguish.. the helplessness... the hopelessness... May we rescue those so bound.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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You have dealt with a horrifying reality and done it well. The subject is so disturbing on so many levels. As a mother, as a woman, as a human being...I am old enough to understand the depths of depravity that human beings can stoop to, but it still sickens my soul, and chills my heart. This is well worth reading and should be.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

thank You, such great review. Yup, its the horrifying reality and to think it still exist hidden in .. read more
i really like this keep up the work

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem addresses a real trgedy in this world. Many people are kept against their will and trying to escape is frightening. If they aren't killed and run away, who is there to help them?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

12 Years Ago

that's a question that is really hard to answer. what frightening about this is that its true and it.. read more
The picture and the poem are different thematically and in tone. I found the poem exceeded the picture in taste.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good, and kind of scary. It could be continued as a short story or even a book if you wanted to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was dark and frightening. It's terrible that this happens. Just f*****g awful. You really tapped into something powerful here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah.. little bit dark.. BTW.. it is good that you suspense the reader to think carefully what's next.. ahha :) GREAT WRITE.. thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful writing, my friend. Very effective expression in this well executed write. Kudos!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this and the free verse of it gives it a story like quality. I didn't really mind the picture though the poem itself took care of the imagery but the poem to me was a nice touch. This was a very good poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WillyamPax..I agree with MoriartyMesa when he says Your images were not needed..the words spoke on their own...A powerful piece your wrote..and I thank you for reminding us what goes on & giving a voice to those who can not speak for themselves..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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