Chapter 9: Moments to remember

Mr. Bone:

Can we talk Less? Do you love me?

---Silence is the only reply I heard. Yet droplet of tears started to flow in her eyes.---

 

Hey why are you crying? Did I say something that hurt you much?

         ---Droplets turn into outburst of tears. ---

 

You really do love me, since when?

       ---I touch her face to wipe away the tear that flow so fluidly in her eyes. ---

 

I said before I would punch anybody who would hurt or make you cry like this. Yet I can’t hurt myself that I’m already battered with pains in my life right now. Please don’t cry, I am not worthy of your tears. I've hurt so many people back at home. Now you, seeing you like this brings piercing pain in my chest. I felt so sorry right now for you. For the fact that I can’t give your love back. I think I’m not capable of love right now. I hate myself so much to love someone else.

 

 

Miss. Lessie:

Before I promise myself not to love you anymore and move on with my life. Just a step behind you is already enough. I tried dating what my father asked me to date. There was one guy who caught my attention. Then we began dating until we got engaged. I understand that pure Love doesn’t always ask anything in return. Love always gives without wanting anything back. Because love isn’t greedy and selfish, it gives way to others and doesn’t take what isn’t their own. The people we love, we just learned to love them in our heart. Pretending to be normal is quite draining sometimes. But I always remember you at heart then I’ll be ok. Last night was one of my best moments to remember.

 

A simple wish that have come true

A fantasy that comes to reality

Now facing veracity

is hard, still I’m happy.

 

I don’t need your love. I’ve survive with just looking at you and keeping you at heart. I’ve already accepted that fact long time ago that you can’t love me back. You’re so near yet a step from you is just another step in the wrong direction. Even though you’d let me step in the right direction just these once, it’s already too much I ever asked for in life. I could not ask for anything more than that. I’m getting married tomorrow so this will be the last day for me to be so close to you. Actually I just escape from all the wedding preparations.

--no matter what I keep telling myself to stop loving you, I still love you anyways. With all that you’ve said, I’m satisfied from all that happened recently, so I could never asked for more. Last night was enough. Hope I could say that to you.--

 

 

Mr. Bone:

You’re really a special friend.

 

A friend who loves me

For just being me

            And everything I am

unselfishly and unconditionally.

 

Miss. Lessie:

Now were both crying.

 

They wipe each other’s tears. Then Miss Lessie broke the distance for a one last kiss on the forehead.

 

Miss. Lessie:

I need to go now Bone. Actually my flight is today.

---I lied, just to escape this madness.---

 

Mr. Bone:

What are you talking about? It’s past 8 pm. Is there even a flight schedule this late?

            ---I think she’s lying.---

 

Miss. Lessie:

Yes, there is!

---I lied again, please just let me go.---

 

Mr. Bone:

But why?

---I can’t think clearly anymore. It gets me more confuse right now.---

 

Miss. Lessie:

Sorry Bone, I must go now. You take care.

---I must go, for now his in a state of confusion. A time to escape.---

 

Mr. Bone:

---I can’t feel my feet. It can’t move and stop her from leaving. Maybe this is it. Another sad story has end by hearing the door shut.---

Author's Note

if there is confusion on how i write this chapter a little info:
+ a sentence that is enclose to a --- sentence --- are their thoughts
+ the one in italic and not enclose, i did that because its a poem of their feelings and they spoke it with clear meaning from their soul (hope you understand).

the next chapter of the second book is here:
wondering thoughts

other than that hope you enjoy this chapter

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

i just want to say before reading it all, The beginning of their conversation sounds soo real and true, like i have de ja vu, as this words are typically expressed from a man and the tears are the way of woman in love! (there is no confusion for me, which are their thoughts and what they speak, it`s quite clear, dear Pax! u made my tears come by reading her thoughts and her devotion to him...so sad really, please continue, i want to understand what happens after! I won`t believe that is end?)
nour~

[Pax]

thank you. my friend... I'm so happy finally you have finnish the first book...
so glad... happy jump...

[FJ Davis]

Poignant and quite touching.
Emotions, very well expressed.
Excellent read, Pax!

[Pax]

I'm so thankful you have read this mr. Frank ~ your enjoyment is always treasured :)

[Ency Bearis]

I analyzed this chapter with stab of pathos. The conversation seemed with lot of emotion involved with the 2 characters. Great story pax.

[Pax]

wow ~ sir Ency, naka glimpse naman ako sa dictionary nito : pathos ~ and i say wow that is such a big word ~ para mo naring sinabing highly emotional itong chapter na ito ~ i am grateful with that, always a pleasure to hear your reviews ~ maraming maraming salamat!

[Ency Bearis]

my pleasure and you're welcome pax

[Dhaye]

Pax, you're so cruel. Why are your stories have this kind of ending? Sad...

I had a great time reading the whole book. You have your own style in writing. :)

[Pax]

kaya nga segoro i divided it into 2 books ~ just right lang naman sa main tittle kabayan ~ :D ~ I am glad you found my style ~ and enjoyed this story :D thank you very much Dhaye ~

[Corset]

hurry I need the next chapter! That was the last chapter?? groan..now I have to wait, arrgh...

[Pax]

psst... here is a glimpse of the first chapter: still thinking about the tittle of the next book so stay tune:
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/willyampax/1040855/

[Corset]

she left..good for her! I must say I'm surprised, but that is exactly how it should go...poor baby, at least she got laid hahahahahaaaaaa, just kidding...the emotions in this on both sides are so true to life amazing work Pax!

[Pax]

surprising yes... for its the ways it should be... me to i didn't expect she would say the title in the dialog... hahaha... she did got laid..lol... your amazing your self as well dear friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good conversation in this chapter. Sometime when we talk enough. Can talk our self into a bad situation with a bad ending. A sad ending to a outstanding tale.
Coyote

[Pax]

thanks you so much my friend....you've read it to the end...yes a sad ending...hoping that in the next book it will be a happy end...but we never know...I'll start it soon...