Heart isn't Alone

Heart is blind without the mind to imagine
Yet the Heart is alive and it beats that speaks our soul
Heart does not function alone
But it's the Center of it all.

Our mind unites the five senses
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The mind process what it hears
The mind creates what it sees
The mind evaluates what it smells
The mind appraises what it tastes
The mind senses whatever the body touches
The mind is only a machine without its core.
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Heart and Mind connect
Because it's the most important to protect
It's a bond that is part of us ever since we were born
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                                               It beats our fear
                                               It beats our pain
                                               It beats our sorrow
Our heart is our soul              It beats our excitement
Where emotions are stored   It beats our pleasure
                                               It beats our passion
                                               It beats our love
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It speaks in silence
The mind only speaks what the heart tells
They communicate with a language that is unknown

The mind is neither good nor evil
But the heart is capable of being good or evil
The heart is capable of anything that speaks our nature
Even if your heart is dark as the darkest night
Another heart will give flame to start a light
A flame that will serve as light in your darkest night

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I believe this to be true...Our hearts can feel many things... it is what makes us who we are. Lovely write!


" It beats our fear
It beats our pain
It beats our sorrow
"Our heart is our soul It beats our excitement
Where emotions are stored" It beats our pleasure
It beats our passion
It beats our love"

[Sweets]

I agree with you, a heart can either be good or evil, but the mind can only be good :)
Loved the connection between poetry and science...wonderful work !

[Kuhr Gred]

Heart and Mind connect
Because it's the most important to protect
It's a bond that is part of us ever since we were born! this nice quote! GREAT WRITE :)
- Kuhr Gred

[Underestimated]

It's a good poem, and you have some great lines. A little disjointed, they could all fit together more to come to one meaning, but overall, with a little editing this could be powerful.

[emman]

regardless of the grammar this poem is great..its so interesting by putting some science in poetry :) nice bai

[Brittany]

I thought this was a beautiful reflection of heart and mind. I really enjoyed this poem. Keep writing.

[Gurdeep...The Lost]

wonderful write..)

[BikerAngie]

nice write

[Wondering Mind]

A concept for much dialect. Which part is which, sometimes, my heart wonders and my mind beats.